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Yugi عضوة MAJIC
عدد المساهمات : 840 تاريخ التسجيل : 08/02/2011 العمر : 27 الموقع : where do think OFCOURSE infrot the computer DUHH!!!!!! hontoni mattaku
| موضوع: pure gold..........................i wrote by myself الثلاثاء يوليو 05, 2011 8:21 pm | |
| ok so i wrote this horror story n i hope u like it mina-san
“Ever since I was a young girl I hated being in this house It freaks me out ………. Have any one thought of what I meant when I said there IS Something wrong……I…I mean……AHH….AHH WHAT THE HELL IS THAT!!?? AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH” *SCREAMS WERE HEARD ALL OVER THE PLACE* The next morning: “It was a dark night that day ,I still can’t remember what happened exactly But I can assure you Granma that there was something or someone” Said the girl to her grandmother “there has to be someone , I mean I am a 14 years old living with my grand mother In a village that has people who a freaked out when hearing the name of That guy….wait what did you call him……ya I remember His name was KIN KIYOSHI or pure gold looool And ok I have one question for you granny I know that my parents got rid of me by throwing me here But, why the hell or should I say when the hell did people Forgot to even visit or even say hi,what now they’re too afraid of our house now or maybe ………me????” *silence* “I’m sorry granny I didn’t mean it ,I………I don’t feel good today” p.s:Ken means –gold and Kiyoshi means purity “at last, some peace inside my lonely room, well since every one of you people is reading my story ,and yes I am talking to you readers I am going to tell you what all of this is about Well……there was an old king who ruled this village And guess what was his name ……………………………………… Yes it was KEN KIYOSHI well This king wasn’t that nice…..or should I say he wasn’t nice at all They say that he had a soul of a demon inside of him Ok I know he was evil buy seriously he was that fearsome Well there is one thing for sure I AM GLAD I didn’t live in his time Well I heard he used to torture people just for fun Or as he say to full his bloodlust I even heard he had torturing rooms in his castle and it was HUGE Well whatever………. That’s probably all you need to know about him”
Later that day –at that night Everynight in this house the young girl heard some sounds It was weird she didn’t know what was it but it seemed like it was …………………………… A grope of people talking murmuring and whispering *gulp* ‘’I could’ve sworn I just thought that I heard some voice just behind my back’’ Thought the girl ‘’but hey, it’s not anything new well it’s not like I don’t hear it every single Day over and over its starting to get on my nerves’’ Thought the girl as she walked out of her room ‘’although I know I’m not suppose to follow this sound and I know where it Leads and I know I’m forbidden from going to there but this time I have gatto ‘’ The girl walked the stairway as she heard the one sound of this Annoying loud sound of the old wooden stairway She went down and at last she arrived there It was the basement The girl opened the old wooden door as she heard The creaking of the door…… “ahhhhh the smell here is awful” Said the girl in a very low voice after all she doesn’t want to Wake her grandmother up She cover her nose and continued to walk toward the room And the voices was getting louder and louder There was nothing there except some old materials But wait There one last thing she didn’t check In the back of the room in the basement there was a door at the corner The girl just stood there wondering if she should open the door or not Suddenly all the voices stopped It just did And a very low sound of a lullaby was heard It seemed like a warm voice singing, it made her feel better In some twisted way She got near from the door closer and closer She placed her hand on the doors knob All though she was shaking she just had to know what’s inside? And who is singing? Could there be someone like a ghost? Her heart pounded like crazy ‘’ok I wont do anything I’d just take a peek……just one peek’’ Thought the girl She opened the door as slow as she can
The girl covered her mouth from screaming As she opened her eyes wildly It was her Grandmother singing the lullaby inside a torturing While torturing a grope of people all at once The girl ran as hard as she could but her heart soped from beating when she arrived to the Door It was locked but that’s not the reason of her fear it was The feeling of a heavy breath besides her neck She turned around very heavily and slowly It seems like a tall man wearing a golden japanese yukata and it seems that he was about to kill her “HAHA……………at last some FRESH HUMEN BLOOD” the girl couldn't see any of the mans features because it was soo dark The girl was killed and the last thing she saw behind the tall man was v v v v v v v v
--the end ok now girls tell me did you now who was the man ??????? didi u like it and thank you
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Yugi عضوة MAJIC
عدد المساهمات : 840 تاريخ التسجيل : 08/02/2011 العمر : 27 الموقع : where do think OFCOURSE infrot the computer DUHH!!!!!! hontoni mattaku
| موضوع: رد: pure gold..........................i wrote by myself الثلاثاء يوليو 05, 2011 8:25 pm | |
| ok there is some mistakes but forgive me | |
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Mikage عضوة MAJIC
عدد المساهمات : 1282 تاريخ التسجيل : 02/02/2011 العمر : 28 الموقع : Beyond The Clouds
| موضوع: رد: pure gold..........................i wrote by myself الأربعاء يوليو 06, 2011 1:14 am | |
| Omg !!! Omg !!! Omg !!! Really OMMMMMMMMMMMG Yeah yeah it was him it was KEN KIYOSHI حسيت أني إندمجت مع القصه صدددق فيها تشوييييييييييق ما شاء الله عليج و هذا عنصر وايد مهم بالنسبه للقصص وبالذات للقصص المرعبه ... !!! أريغاتوووو على القصه الروعه ما شاء الله ... ! حبيتها !
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Yugi عضوة MAJIC
عدد المساهمات : 840 تاريخ التسجيل : 08/02/2011 العمر : 27 الموقع : where do think OFCOURSE infrot the computer DUHH!!!!!! hontoni mattaku
| موضوع: رد: pure gold..........................i wrote by myself الأربعاء يوليو 06, 2011 3:26 pm | |
| hontoni hontoni u liked it that makes me sooo happy arigatooo mika 4 reading the hole story its a bit long ''^^ | |
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hanna-himi عضو متميّز
عدد المساهمات : 157 تاريخ التسجيل : 04/03/2011 العمر : 25 الموقع : at home
| موضوع: رد: pure gold..........................i wrote by myself الأربعاء يوليو 06, 2011 3:48 pm | |
| WOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOW COOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOL AND AWESOME!!!!
I LVOED IT thnx for the story^^ | |
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Yugi عضوة MAJIC
عدد المساهمات : 840 تاريخ التسجيل : 08/02/2011 العمر : 27 الموقع : where do think OFCOURSE infrot the computer DUHH!!!!!! hontoni mattaku
| موضوع: رد: pure gold..........................i wrote by myself الأربعاء يوليو 06, 2011 6:48 pm | |
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AnGeL عضوة MAJIC
عدد المساهمات : 499 تاريخ التسجيل : 10/12/2010 العمر : 28 الموقع : In My Own World~
| موضوع: رد: pure gold..........................i wrote by myself الخميس يوليو 07, 2011 6:57 am | |
| WOOOOW!!! Nice story Yugi-samaaa ~~ I looooooooooooved it ^^ ThnQ for sharing ~ | |
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Yugi عضوة MAJIC
عدد المساهمات : 840 تاريخ التسجيل : 08/02/2011 العمر : 27 الموقع : where do think OFCOURSE infrot the computer DUHH!!!!!! hontoni mattaku
| موضوع: رد: pure gold..........................i wrote by myself الخميس يوليو 07, 2011 3:31 pm | |
| no prob its just that im soooooooooo happy btw my dad helped me aloooooooooooooooooot soo most of the copyrights goes 2 him n i worked hard on this 1 arigatoo | |
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Taiga عضوة MAJIC
عدد المساهمات : 742 تاريخ التسجيل : 12/02/2011
| موضوع: رد: pure gold..........................i wrote by myself الخميس أغسطس 11, 2011 7:36 am | |
| OMG....!!!!! .. sooooGGGoooiiiyoooh... .. hhontoonei... nice story .. .. i like the part when she die .. .. thaaanx | |
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Yugi عضوة MAJIC
عدد المساهمات : 840 تاريخ التسجيل : 08/02/2011 العمر : 27 الموقع : where do think OFCOURSE infrot the computer DUHH!!!!!! hontoni mattaku
| موضوع: رد: pure gold..........................i wrote by myself الخميس أغسطس 11, 2011 3:58 pm | |
| mehehehehhe
thnx taiga im really happy u liked it
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