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 pure gold..........................i wrote by myself

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Yugi
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مُساهمةموضوع: pure gold..........................i wrote by myself    الثلاثاء يوليو 05, 2011 8:21 pm



ok so i wrote this horror story n i hope u like it mina-san





“Ever since I was a young girl I hated being in this house
It freaks me out ……….
Have any one thought of what I meant when I said there IS
Something wrong……I…I mean……AHH….AHH WHAT THE HELL IS THAT!!??
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH”
*SCREAMS WERE HEARD ALL OVER THE PLACE*
The next morning:
“It was a dark night that day ,I still can’t remember what happened exactly
But I can assure you Granma that there was something or someone”
Said the girl to her grandmother
“there has to be someone , I mean I am a 14 years old living with my grand mother
In a village that has people who a freaked out when hearing the name of
That guy….wait what did you call him……ya I remember
His name was KIN KIYOSHI or pure gold looool
And ok I have one question for you granny
I know that my parents got rid of me by throwing me here
But, why the hell or should I say when the hell did people
Forgot to even visit or even say hi,what now they’re too afraid of our house now or maybe
………me????”
*silence*
“I’m sorry granny I didn’t mean it ,I………I don’t feel good today”
p.s:Ken means –gold
and Kiyoshi means purity
“at last, some peace inside my lonely room,
well since every one of you people is reading my story ,and yes I am talking to you readers
I am going to tell you what all of this is about
Well……there was an old king who ruled this village
And guess what was his name
………………………………………
Yes it was KEN KIYOSHI well
This king wasn’t that nice…..or should I say he wasn’t nice at all
They say that he had a soul of a demon inside of him
Ok I know he was evil buy seriously he was that fearsome
Well there is one thing for sure I AM GLAD I didn’t live in his time
Well I heard he used to torture people just for fun
Or as he say to full his bloodlust
I even heard he had torturing rooms in his castle and it was HUGE
Well whatever……….
That’s probably all you need to know about him”


Later that day –at that night
Everynight in this house the young girl heard some sounds
It was weird she didn’t know what was it but it seemed like it was
……………………………
A grope of people talking murmuring and whispering
*gulp*
‘’I could’ve sworn I just thought that I heard some voice just behind my back’’
Thought the girl
‘’but hey, it’s not anything new well it’s not like I don’t hear it every single
Day over and over its starting to get on my nerves’’
Thought the girl as she walked out of her room
‘’although I know I’m not suppose to follow this sound and I know where it
Leads and I know I’m forbidden from going to there but this time
I have gatto ‘’
The girl walked the stairway as she heard the one sound of this
Annoying loud sound of the old wooden stairway
She went down and at last she arrived there
It was the basement
The girl opened the old wooden door as she heard
The creaking of the door……
“ahhhhh the smell here is awful”
Said the girl in a very low voice after all she doesn’t want to
Wake her grandmother up
She cover her nose and continued to walk toward the room
And the voices was getting louder and louder
There was nothing there except some old materials
But wait
There one last thing she didn’t check
In the back of the room in the basement there was a door at the corner
The girl just stood there wondering if she should open the door or not
Suddenly all the voices stopped
It just did
And a very low sound of a lullaby was heard
It seemed like a warm voice singing, it made her feel better
In some twisted way
She got near from the door closer and closer
She placed her hand on the doors knob
All though she was shaking she just had to know what’s inside?
And who is singing?
Could there be someone like a ghost?
Her heart pounded like crazy
‘’ok I wont do anything I’d just take a peek……just one peek’’
Thought the girl
She opened the door as slow as she can


The girl covered her mouth from screaming
As she opened her eyes wildly
It was her
Grandmother singing the lullaby inside a torturing
While torturing a grope of people all at once
The girl ran as hard as she could but her heart soped from beating when she arrived to the
Door
It was locked but that’s not the reason of her fear it was
The feeling of a heavy breath besides her neck
She turned around very heavily and slowly
It seems like a tall man wearing a golden japanese yukata
and it seems that he was about to kill her
“HAHA……………at last some FRESH HUMEN BLOOD”
the girl couldn't see any of the mans features because it was soo dark
The girl was killed and the last thing she saw behind the tall man was
v
v
v
v
v
v
v
v


--the end
ok now girls tell me did you now who was the man
???????

didi u like it
and thank you
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مُساهمةموضوع: رد: pure gold..........................i wrote by myself    الثلاثاء يوليو 05, 2011 8:25 pm

ok there is some mistakes but forgive me
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مُساهمةموضوع: رد: pure gold..........................i wrote by myself    الأربعاء يوليو 06, 2011 1:14 am




Omg !!! Omg !!! Omg !!! Really OMMMMMMMMMMMG

Yeah yeah it was him
it was KEN KIYOSHI

حسيت أني إندمجت مع القصه
صدددق فيها تشوييييييييييق ما شاء الله عليج
و هذا عنصر وايد مهم بالنسبه للقصص وبالذات
للقصص المرعبه ... !!!

أريغاتوووو على القصه الروعه ما شاء الله ... !
حبيتها !

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مُساهمةموضوع: رد: pure gold..........................i wrote by myself    الأربعاء يوليو 06, 2011 3:26 pm

hontoni hontoni u liked it

that makes me sooo happy

arigatooo mika 4 reading the hole story

its a bit long

''^^
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مُساهمةموضوع: رد: pure gold..........................i wrote by myself    الأربعاء يوليو 06, 2011 3:48 pm

WOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOW
COOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOL
AND
AWESOME!!!!


I LVOED IT thnx for the story^^
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مُساهمةموضوع: رد: pure gold..........................i wrote by myself    الأربعاء يوليو 06, 2011 6:48 pm

no prob

glad u liked it
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مُساهمةموضوع: رد: pure gold..........................i wrote by myself    الخميس يوليو 07, 2011 6:57 am

WOOOOW!!! Nice story Yugi-samaaa ~~


I looooooooooooved it ^^

ThnQ for sharing ~

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Thnx MiKaGe ~^^~
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مُساهمةموضوع: رد: pure gold..........................i wrote by myself    الخميس يوليو 07, 2011 3:31 pm

no prob

its just that im soooooooooo

happy

btw my dad

helped me aloooooooooooooooooot

soo most of the copyrights goes 2 him

n i worked hard on this 1

arigatoo
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مُساهمةموضوع: رد: pure gold..........................i wrote by myself    الخميس أغسطس 11, 2011 7:36 am

OMG....!!!!!
..
sooooGGGoooiiiyoooh...
..
hhontoonei... nice story ..
..
i like the part when she die ..
..
thaaanx
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مُساهمةموضوع: رد: pure gold..........................i wrote by myself    الخميس أغسطس 11, 2011 3:58 pm

mehehehehhe

thnx taiga im really happy u liked it

hehe

>>luv u
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